Question

【题目】书面表达 (本大题共10分)

学校将在下周举行英文演讲比赛，Jack的话题是 “对我影响最深的人”，请根据以下材料，帮他组织一篇90字左右英文演讲稿，介绍一下三位对他影响最深的人。

Persons	Details
My father	1. 40多岁，充满爱心 2. 令我惊讶的是，他已决定去世后捐赠遗体供医学研究
Tan Dun	1. 1958年出生在湖南省中部地区，从小对音乐很感兴趣 2. 成功地把中西方音乐融合在一起
Jackie Chan	1.已参演了近100部影片，获得了许多奖项 2. 多年从事慈善工作（具体表现用1到2句话说明） 3. 被公认为是一位超级明星，受到人们高度赞扬

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

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They are all my heroes. From now on , I will learn from them.

Answer 1

【答案】

My father is in his forties. He has a heart full of love. To my surprise, he has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.

Tan Dun was born in central Hunan, China. When he was very young, Tan showed an interest in Music. He has successfully brought Chinese and Western music together.

Jackie Chan has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. He has spent many years doing charity work. He often donates much money to help poor people. He is considered as a super star and is thought highly of by many people.

【解析】

试题分析： 这是一篇提纲类作文。题目中已经明确了写作的主题和要点。作文中一定要包含表格中所列的要点，而且可以适当补充，不能简单的逐字逐句翻译，而应该将它们有机地组织在一起。另外，注意文章的时态，要根据实际情况来使用正确的时态。

写作亮点：这篇文章结构完整，要点齐全，表达准确流利，是一篇优秀的作文。文章中能够准确使用多种时态，包括一般现在时，一般过去时和现在完成时等。该篇作文使用了很多短语，例如To my surprise让我吃惊的是；showed an interest in对……表现兴趣；spent many years doing花时间做某事；is considered as被认为是；等等。