Question

【题目】假如你是第二中学的一名初三学生李雷，你要写一封信给青少年专家Sigmund，告诉他你遇到的问题，并请求帮助。请根据下列表格中的信息完成这封信。

姓名	李雷
生肖	羊
最喜欢的颜色	蓝色，代表平静，使人放松
个人特质	善良、慷慨、自信，富有创造力
遇到的问题	1．喜欢打篮球，花很多时间在这上面：父母对你要求严格，不允 许你打·篮球，要求你放弃这个爱好： 2．作业太多，经常熬夜，上课觉得疲惫； 3…．．(至少再补充1个)
目前需求	希望得到建议

注意：

1词数90左右。书信的开头和结尾己写好，不计入总词数

2书信须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，：

3书信中不得出现真实的人名等相关信息。(以下格式写在答题纸上)

Dear Mr. Sigrnund,

I am writing to you to ask for your help.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Lei

I like chatting on line, my mother says that is a bad habit. And sometimes I come home too late, my parents are not happy. They ask me to get home on time. I don’t know how to solve these problems. Can you give me some advice?

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Sigrnund,

I am writing to you to ask for your help.

My name is Li Lei. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School. I was born in the year of Goat. My favorite color is blue, because orange stands for happiness. I think I am kind-hearted, I often help the olds. I am also generous and confident. I am a creative boy.

Though I am a good boy, I also have problems. I like playing basketball and spend much time on it. But my parents are very strict with me. They don’t allow me to play it and demand me to give it up because they think it waste my study time. Another problem is that I often stay up to do my homework because I have too much homework. As a result, I often feel tired in class. In addition, I like chatting on line, my mother says that is a bad habit. And sometimes I come home too late, my parents are not happy. They ask me to get home on time. I don’t know how to solve these problems. Can you give me some advice?

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Lei

【解析】

试题这是一篇材料作文，表中内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。