Question

【题目】写作
你的朋友Jack由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛，并且睡不好觉。写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况，并给出你对他的建议。
要求：1内容包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥；
2书写认真，句子通顺；
3词数：80词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】例文：
I have a friend his name is Jim. He likes playing computer games. Every day he spend a lot of time playing games. I think he shouldn't spend time playing games every day. Because it's bad for our health. Now he has a headache, a sore eye and a sore back. He should spend more time with his friends. He can play football or do other sports with his friends. Doing exercise is good for our health.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，吉姆写信给他的好朋友杰克，给他一些照顾好自己的身体的建议。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，二人 称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：you don't…….；I think……. You should…….及You shouldn't……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要祝愿他的身体很快恢复。