Question

根据以下信息，以My New Classmate为题写一篇短文，介绍一下Nick吧。

Name	Nick
Age（年龄）	13
From	England
Class	Class 5, Grade 7
Look（相貌）	tall, strong, hair, long, yellow face, round eyes, big mouth, small
Clothes	yellow shirt green pants brown shoes

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

My new classmate

Today we are very glad to have a new friend. He is a boy. He is called Nick. He is 13 years old. He is from England. He is tall and strong. His hair is long and yellow. He has a round face and big eyes.His mouth is very small. He wears a yellow shirt and green shoes.His shoes are brown. Now we are in the same class, Class 5 Grade 7.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文是一篇提纲作文，要求写作的内容是介绍一个新的同学。新同学的信息已经全部给出。 考生需要做的就是把这些信息整合到一起，组成一篇完整的文章。此话题正是初一年级重点话题。可以用到所学的短语和句式。

【亮点说明】例文成功地把所给的信息整合成一篇完整的文章。并不是逐条编写句子。在顺序上也做了一定的调整，使文章更加自然。用到了初中一年级所要求掌握的短语及句式，比如be called, come from, has a round face等等。描写准确而全面。

考点：提纲作文