题目内容
【题目】书面表达(共20分)
朋友情深,友谊无价。在与朋友交往的过程中,你认为什么是最重要的?是以诚相待、彼此信任,还是……?目前,你校校刊正在就此话题开展征文活动,请你结合自己的经历,写一篇英语短文,谈谈看法。
内容提示:(1)What is the most important about friendship?
(2)Share your experience.
要求:(1)中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
(3)词数80左右。
【答案】
As we all know, friends are important for us in our daily life. And everyone needs friends. Friend means a person who gets on well with you and helps you. I think the most important about friendship is helpful.
My best friend is Jack. We are classmates since we went to school about 9 years ago. Either of us is wrong. We tell him. Either of us has trouble We help him. When I am happy, Jack is happy. When Jack is sad, I also feel down. We are good friends and we think our friendship will last long.
A friend in need is a friend indeed. Let’s help others and have more friends.
【解析】
试题分析:本题要求谈谈在与朋友交往的过程中最重要的方面,并以此为话题给校刊写一篇征文。要求从“朋友交往最重要的是什么”、“自己的经历”两个方面进行写作。短文要中心突出,思想积极向上,语义连贯,层次清晰。短文用第一人称,一般现在时及一般过去时两种时态形式。
写作亮点:短文第一段由朋友着笔,提出自己的观点:友情中最重要的是帮助;主题自然引出,观点明确。第二段讲自己与好朋友之间的故事,指出错误,帮助解决烦恼,同喜同忧,字里行间都突出了“帮助”的主题。第三段再次揭示短文主旨:患难朋友才是真朋友,我们帮助别人,交更多的朋友吧。层次清楚,结构明晰。中心突出,主题鲜明。