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16．Frank 去年来到泰中学习．在校学习期间，他对学校提倡的"创建和谐校园"活动感触颇深．请你以他的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学习的现状并谈谈感受．
创建和谐校园
学生之间和谐发展学习刻苦，兴趣广泛，友爱互助…
老师学生和谐相处学生尊敬老师；老师严格要求学生；师生关系融洽…
人与环境和谐共存爱护花草树木，保持环境卫生，不随地乱扔废弃物…
个人感想…
要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯．
2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥，但不得出现真实班级、姓名等．
3、词数：100词左右（信的开头与结尾已给出，不记入总词数）．
4、参考词数：respect尊敬；build up建立，创建；a harmonious campus和谐校园；
impress 给…留下印象
Dear Mum and Dad，
Time flies!I've been here for nearly a year．I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one．The students in our schoolis really a good one．The students in our school work hard at their lessons．We take an active part in activities．We are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other．
The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students．They work hard and do what they can do to help us．And the students respect their teachers．We get on well with each other．The students in our school try their best to keep the school yard clean and tidy．They never throw waste about or pick the flowers．
In a word，I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school．I love my new school．
Yours，
Frank．

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是Frank 给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍自己在泰中的学习的现状并谈谈感受．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1学生之间和谐发展：学习刻苦，兴趣广泛，友爱互助…
2老师学生和谐相处：学生尊敬老师；老师严格要求学生；师生关系融洽…
3人与环境和谐共存：护花草树木，保持环境卫生，不随地乱扔废弃物…
4个人感想：
常用到的重点短语：
work hard 努力学习
take part in 参加
be friendly to sb 对某人友好
get on well with sb与某人相处的好
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
throw about 乱扔
【高分句型】
1．They work hard and do①what they can do ②to help us．
①what引导的宾语从句，作为do的宾语．
②动词不定式做目的状语．
2．①In a word，I ②am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school．
①in a word 总之
②一般现在时的被动语态--am/is/are+过去分词．

解答 Dear Mum and Dad，
    Time flies!I've been here for nearly a year．I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one．The students in our school is really a good one．The students in our school work hard at their lessons．We take an active part in activities．We are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other．（学生之间和谐发展）  
  The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students．They work hard and do what they can do to help us．【高分句型】And the students respect their teachers．We get on well with each other．（老师学生和谐相处）The students in our school try their best to keep the school yard clean and tidy．They never throw waste about or pick the flowers．（人与环境和谐共存）
    In a word，I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school．【高分句型】I love my new school．（我的感想）
     Yours，
     Frank

点评 本图表所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并需有适当发挥．要注意句式的多样性，适当的使用宾语从句，转折词however，连词and等．考生可在作文之前对每部分列出大致的提纲，做到主题明确，条理清楚．可以根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句，为全文的展开做好铺垫．注意行文连贯，书写规范，不要出现一些诸如语法或词汇的错误．

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