Question

书面表达（满分10分）

假如你是刘红的老师，刘红今天因 病没来上学。请你根据提示和要求给刘红发一封e-mail, 以示关心。

提示：1 不要着急，遵照医嘱休息、吃药

2 以后多锻炼、必须吃早餐、少吃零食、饮食平衡（have a balanced diet）才会健康

要求：

① 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

② 文中需包括所有写作要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当加入过渡词句，使短文通顺、连贯。

Dear Liuhong,

Are you feeling better now?____________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

All of us are worrying about you. Please don’t worry. We will help you with your lessons. You’d better have a good rest at home and take medicine as the doctor told you. When you feel better, you should do some exercise and eat breakfast everyday. Breakfast is very important for your health. Try to eat fewer snacks. Have a balanced diet every day and you will be strong and healthy.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让我们给刘红发一封邮件以示关心。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如You’d better have a good rest at home and take medicine as the doctor told you. Have a balanced diet every day and you will be strong and healthy.等好的句式。

考点：提纲类作文。