Question

1．你校组织一次与澳大利亚交流生的交流活动，主题为"My Dream School"．请根据表中的提示词，用英语写一篇发言稿，描述你理想中的高中学校．

Campus （校园）	teachers & classmates	In class	After class．
large，beautiful， …	kind，friendly， …	free to choose subjects， a lot of practice …	clubs and sports， a little homework． …

要求：：（1 ）词数：80～100．
（2 ）文中不得出现真实姓名或校名．
（3 ）开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
My Dream School
Ladies and gentlemen，
I'd like to share with you my dream school．The moment you enter this school．You will see a large and beautiful campus with trees and flowers here and there．
In this school，we are living like a big family．Teachers here are kind as parents and classmates get along well with each other like brothers and sisters．When in class，we are free to choose what we are interested in and are given a lot of time to practice．After class，instead of doing much homework，we can join different kinds of clubs and do whatever sports we like．
What do you think of my dream school？．
That's all．Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是为"My Dream School"为题描述你理想中的高中学校．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1校园大而美丽
2老师同学友好善良
3课堂能自主选择科目，很多练习
4课后有俱乐部运动，作业少
常用到的重点短语：
here and there四处
get along with sb与某人相处
instead of 而不是…
be interested in 对…感兴趣
高分句型：
1．①When in class，we are free to choose ②what we are interested in and ③are given a lot of time ④to practice．
①when引导的时间状语从句，完整表达是when we are in class，主从句的主语一致，且谓语含有be，故省略主语和谓语．
②what引导的宾语从句，作为choose的宾语．
③一般现在时的被动语态，主语是we是动词give的承受者，构成被动关系．
④o practice动词不定式作为目的状语．
2．After class，①instead of doing much homework，we can join different kinds of clubs and do ②whatever sports ③we like
①instead of代替，而不是，of是介词，后加名词代词或动名词．
②whatever引导的宾语从句，作为do的宾语．
③we like是定语从句，修饰前面的sports，关系词which/that是定语从句的宾语，故可以省略．

解答 Ladies and gentlemen，
I‘d like to share with you my dream school．The moment you enter this school．You will see a large and beautiful campus with trees and flowers here and there．（校园大而美丽）
In this school，we are living like a big family．Teachers here are kind as parents and  classmates get along well with each other like brothers and sisters．（老师同学友好善良）When in class，we are free to choose what we are interested in and are given a lot of time to practice．（高分句型）（课堂能自主选择科目，很多练习）After class，instead of doing much homework，we can join different kinds of clubs and do whatever sports we like．（高分句型）
（课后有俱乐部运动，作业少）What do you think of my dream school？
That's all．Thanks for listening．

点评 图表类作文写作之前考生首先要认真审题，确定文章的中心．表格内容要全部包括在作文中，词数要符合要求．句式表达要正确，注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构．文章结构要清晰．考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理，也可为文章增色不少．