Question

Writing 6 ( 2014江苏苏州高新区)

    英语中有一句谅语:Failure is the mother of success.生活中我 们常常会遭遇失败，但只要能正确对待，往往会获得最后的成 功。请就此用英语写一篇短文，主要内容包括：

1. 描述亲身经历的一次失败；

2. 叙说失败后如何获得成功；

3. 谈谈你的感想。

注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计人总 词数；

2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文 连贯、通顺；

3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

    Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success. As the English saying goes Failure is the mother of suecess 

Answer 1

Writing 6

[写作提示]

1. 审题：

这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章，以一句英文谚语作为议论的中心。以 第一、三人称为主，主体时态为一般过去时，谈感想用一般现在时。

2. 确定要点：

(1) 描述亲身经历的一次失败；

(2) 叙说失败后如何获得成功；

(3) 谈谈你的感想。

[参考范文]

    Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success.As the English saying goes,“Failure is the mother of success."

    I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term.Before the match,I was confident I would win.However,I failed.How sad I was!Luckily,my P.E. teacher helped me out.He told me not to lose heart.He also helped me with my skills.With his help,my confidence returned and I came up with several new ideas.The next day,though I had to play against another more skilled boy,I beat him!

    So don't be afraid of failure.If we can deal with it well,failure can be the mother of success!