题目内容

书面表达(15分)

以“My hometown”为题,写一篇80字左右的短文。

提示:

平果位于广西的西部,在右江河畔上。(in the west of, on the Youjiang River)

二十年前是个小镇(ago; a small town),现在……人口超过50万(the population of; over)

离南宁大约120公里(away from; kilometres.因平果铝而出名(be famous for; the Aluminium Factory of Pingguo)冬天不很冷,夏天不很热的地方。平果的人民很友好。(friendly)

 

 

 

 

My home town is on the beautiful coast of Youjiang River in the west of Guangxi. It was a small town twenty years ago, but now the population of it is over 500,000. It’s 120 kilomites away from Nanning. It’s famous for the Aluminium Factory of Pingguo. The weather is nice. It is not too cold in winter and not too hot in summer.There are many places to visit,such as Yuanyang Beach ,Tongtian River,Luxian Lake and so on. Every year there are many tourists visiting the places . The people here are very kind and friendly.

Welcome to my home town ,Pingguo!

【解析】

试题分析:考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。.如It’s famous for the Aluminium Factory of Pingguo. There are many places to visit,such as Yuanyang Beach ,Tongtian River,Luxian Lake and so on.等,but等使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点:话题作文。

 

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