Question

【题目】生活中有许多美好事情值得回忆。你的美好回忆是什么？它是怎么发生的？请以“My sweet memory”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文描述一下吧。

注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名

My sweet memory

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Answer 1

【答案】My sweet memory

My 14 - year- old birthday leftmea sweet memory.

Theclassroom seemed empty when I entered it that morning. Suddenly my classmatesstood up from belowthe desks almost at the same time, and they sang a happy birthday song to me together. “Happy Birthday to you!” and best wishes from my classmates and teachers appeared on the screen. What a big surprise! I was moved to tears. That moment was fixed in my mind forever.

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“My sweet memory”为题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述 “你的美好回忆是什么？它是怎么发生的？”。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般过去时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中14 - year- old birthday，at the same time, best wishes，on the screen, and, in my mind 等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了并列句、时间状语从句、感叹句、被动句等，语句丰富，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。