Question

18．岁月如梭，你一定有很多收获、经历和感悟，这些财富时刻伴随着你的成长．请就the Two Most Valuable Things为题，介绍两件在生命或生活中你认为最有价值的东西或事情．
*valuable--very useful and helpful； be worth a lot of money
内容包括：
1．两件你认为最有价值的东西或事情；
2．你这样认为的理由是什么？
3．在今后的生活中，你会如何对待这两件东西或事情？
要求：
1．内容包含上述几个方面；
2．词数：80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）．
The Two Most Valuable ThingsWe all know that there are many valuable things in the world．For me，the two most valuable things in my life are                                    ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
The old saying"To open a book is always helpful"clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．有句谚语"开卷有益"清楚的告诉了我们读书的好处．
"To open a book is always helpful开卷有益"谚语的应用
【高分句型二】
It is important for everyone to have a healthy body．对每一个人来说拥有健康的身体都是很重要的．
It is+形容词 for sb to do sth对某人来说做某事是…

解答 The Two Most Valuable Things        We all know that there are many valuable things in the world．For me，the two most valuable things in my life are books and health．（引出话题）
The old saying"To open a book is always helpful"clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．【高分句型一】Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．（书是我们的朋友）Books are our teachers．They teach us truth，science，literature，and how to live．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our characters and do many other things which we can not do without them．（书是我们的老师）
          Health is another most valuable  thing a person should have． It is important for everyone to have a healthy body．【高分句型二】Without health，we can't study or work well，even can't eat or sleep well．（失去健康的状况） So health is the foundation of all，while an unhealthy condition could be the worst burden and barrier you could possibly have．（健康是一切的本钱）
Therefore I will read more books and try my best to have a healthy body．（今后的打算）

点评 能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．