Question

上周末，我班同学去了老人院(old people’s home)看望老人。同学们为老人们带上了一些水果、鲜花和其他小礼物，到达之后他们分头行动，为老人们做了很多事情。整理房间，打扫卫生，为老人梳头（comb hair），陪老人聊天(chat with sb)等等，甚至还有两个同学帮助一起为老人做饭。最后大家的老人们一起唱歌跳舞，度过了愉快的一天。请以校报小记者的身份写一则文章报道这件事情。词数100左右。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I had a great time last Sunday, We went to the nursing home with Miss Li last Sunday. When they

saw us arrive, the old people were very happy. After a short rest, we began to work. We were divided

into many groups. Five students played chess with the old men. Ten students talked with them and told

them some interesting things that happened in our school. Fifteen students washed clothes for them.

Twenty students did some cleaning for them. Others combed hair for them.We were tired but happy because we helped others.

Helping others is helping ourselves.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如Ten students talked with them and told

them some interesting things that happened in our school.等，but等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。