题目内容
【题目】写作
Tom去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间，他对学校提倡的“创建和谐校园”活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习主动，兴趣广泛，友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处（如：保持环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物等）。
1.请你以Tom 的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名或地名。
3.词数90左右。
Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I’ve been here for nearly a year. I’ve been here for nearly a year. I’m very pleased to find our school is a good one. The students in our school
Yours,
Tom
【答案】
Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I've been here for nearly a year. I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school work hard at their lessons. They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. They are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.
The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students. They work hard and do what they can do to help their students. And the students respect their teachers. They get on well with each other. The students in our school try their best to keep the school yard clean and tidy. They never throw waste about nor pick the flowers.
In a word, I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school. I love my new school.
Yours,
Tom
【解析】
试题分析：本题要求以Tom 的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。
写作亮点：本文要点明确，语言精练。层次分明。不同要点英语使用的句式也不一样。语言的表述符合语法的结构，运用了大量的短语：be pleased to, work hard at, take an active part in, be friendly to, be ready to, get on well with, try one’s best to do 等等。复合句They work hard and do what they can do to help their students.表达的非常到位；一个被动语态的句子使用的也很得体：I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school.
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