Question

【题目】书面表达(20分)

最近，你班就“Your Ideal Job”展开了一次调查。下表是你们小组的情况， 请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。

组员	个性	理想职业	原因
Millie	有耐心	青少年辅导员	喜欢帮助青少年解决压力问题，并给予他们有价值的建议
Kate	细心	医生	1.(自拟一点内容) 2. 喜欢研究颜色，想用颜色改变人们的不好情绪
Daniel	乐于助人	志愿者	1.(自拟一点内容) 2. 愿意为血癌病人献造血干细胞。
你	有创造力	工程师	(自拟两点内容)

注意：1. 词数100左右(短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。

Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Millie is very patient. She wants to be a youth worker. When she grows up, she likes to help teenagers solve their problems of stress and offer / give them valuable suggestions / advice. Kate is careful, so her ideal job is a doctor. She wants to save more people’s lives. She likes studying colors. She wants to use colours to change people’s bad moods / she wants to change people’s bad moods with colours. Daniel is helpful. He wants to be a volunteer in the future. He thinks it’s meaningful to help people in need. He is willing to donate his blood cells to the person who has blood cancer/with blood cancer. I am creative. I like to be an engineer. I like designing and making things. I want to design/build the most modern high-speed railway connecting my hometown to other big cities in China

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题材料作文。本文所给的材料比较详细。我们要把这些材料用正确的英语把它表达出来，动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。根据要求可知本文主要是一般现在时，人称是第三人称。写作中注意人称、时态、主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文的联系，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的全部内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在句子的结构上很好地使用了简单句。文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时文章还用了一些常用的句式和短语，为文章增添了不少色彩。