Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是动物园的工作人员，今天需要接待几位外国游客。请你根据下表提示写一篇英语短文向他们介绍一下这头狮子。

要求：1. 60词左右，可适当发挥；2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Hi, everyone! Here you can see a lion. ____

Answer 1

【答案】Hi, everyone! Here you can see a lion. His name is Dudu. He is 3 years old. He likes to eat meat a lot. Some people think Dudu is kind of scary, but I don’t think so. He is very friendly and he is really smart. He can play with balls. Many people come to the zoo to watch his shows. Do you like him?

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语，例如3 years old，like to do，eat a lot，be kind of，don’t think so，play with balls，come to the zoo等。同时Here you can see a lion./ Some people think Dudu is kind of scary, but I don’t think so.等多种复杂句式结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。