Question

【题目】根据提示写一篇短文，70个词左右。
提示：（1）林涛和王军是邻居，他们每天一起乘地铁上学、回家，在学习上也互相帮助，他俩是好朋友；
（2）今天是星期天，他们不去上学，他们去动物园；
（3）从他们住的居民楼到动物园有10千米，所以他们坐公共汽车去；
（4）动物园里动物很多，他们玩得很高兴。

Answer 1

【答案】Lin Tao and Wang Jun are neighbors. They go to school and come back home by subway every day. They always help each other .They are good neighbors and friends. Today is Sunday. They don't go to school. They go to the zoo. It's about ten kilometers away from their building to the zoo, so they go to the zoo by bus. They're very happy to see so many animals. They have a good time today!
【解析】本题是一个给定提纲的作文。根据提纲要求，短文要介绍一些有关林涛和王军上放学的情况、周末活动的情况等等。短文用一般现在时态，三人称形式。短文要注意词汇的选择、句型的选用，用正确的英语句子结构形式，避免汉式英语。同时要注意谓语动词的正确形式，注意主谓一致。注意句式的多样性及复杂句式的选用，使短文生动具体。