Question

1．上周日在秦淮河边发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情，请根据以下四幅图所描述的事情经过，为校刊的英语园地写一篇题为"A Brave Young Man"的英文稿件．

注意：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3）词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday．     ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是以"A Brave Young Man"为题根据图画记述张明救落水小男孩的事情，时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．描述图画；张明在河边钓鱼，小男孩突然落水，张明跳入河里，尽力去拉小孩，其他人也来帮忙，最终小孩获救．
2．我的感受；
 
常用到的重点短语：
shout for help 呼喊救命
fall into 掉落
jump into 跳入
learn from sb 向某人学习
try one's best to do sth 尽力做某事
【高分句型】
1．He looked around and found①that the little boy was②falling into the water．
①found后是that引导的宾语从句．
②fall into 掉落
2．He ①tried his best to ②pull the boy out of the river．
①try one's best to do sth 尽力做某事
②pull…out of…从…里把…拉出来
3．People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful．
said后是省略了that 宾语从句．

解答 A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday．Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qinhuai River when a little boy went to play nearby．Suddenly，Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help．He looked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water．【高分句型】It was very dangerous．Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately．He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river．【高分句型】At that time other people came to offer help．Finally，the boy was saved and he was very grateful．People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful．．（描述图画）【高分句型】We should learn from him．（我的感受）

点评 这是一篇图画作文．本文所给图画意思表达明确，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．动笔前要认真领会图画内涵，概括要点，并适当发挥．写作中要注意人称、时态语的搭配及主谓一致问题．同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．