Question

【题目】书面表达（共10分）

请以“My family”为题写一篇短文。（50词左右）

Answer 1

【答案】

My family

My family is a big family. There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents,my father and my mother. Because my grandparents are old, they stay at home all day. My parents go to work at workdays. My father is a teacher, and my mother is a nurse. I love them very much. I am the only child in my family. They like me too.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以“My family”为题写一篇短文。写作时，我们首先需要考虑该介绍哪些信息并整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。而且这些关于介绍人物及家庭时所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这是一道介绍家人的作文，包括家庭成员，职业，关系等等。该文中运用了并列句My father is a teacher, and my mother is a nurse.和原因状语从句Because my grandparents are old, they stay at home all day等句型，为文章增色不少。