题目内容
【题目】假如你是Jim,你在外地工作的父母想了解你一下你的学习情况。请根据下面的表格给他们写信,告诉他们你上学期期末考试的成绩。要求:不少与60单词,语法正确,语句流畅。
Chinese | verygood |
English | goodatspeaking |
History | coulddobetter |
Math | notcarefulenough |
P.E | good |
Dear Mom and Dad,
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Love,
Jim
【答案】Dear Mom and Dad,
How’s it going? Things are good here.
I finished my exams last week and got my report card today. I think I did well. My Chinese teacher said my Chinese was very good. My English teacher said I was good at speaking. My science teacher said I was hard-working. And my P.E. teacher said I did very well. But my history teacher said I could do better. Another disappointing result was in math. My math teacher said I was lazy and not careful enough.I think I will study hard at math next term. Please don’t worry about me.
That is all about my report card.
Love,
Jim
【解析】写此类书信作文首先要确定文章的格式。要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。最后检查时要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点:这篇文章语言规范,叙事清楚,词汇及时态运用正确,能够把提示的内容叙述清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。