Question

请根据下面的提示内容，以“My pet dog”为题写一篇短文。80词左右。

提示内容：

1. 你喜欢狗，因为狗是忠实的伙伴，容易相处；

2. 你的宠物狗的特征与习性；

3. 你们相处的一些情况。

提示词语： faithful companion 忠实的伙伴

My pet dog

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My pet dog

I’m a dog lover, for dogs are faithful comanions and easy to get along with.

I have kept one in my house, whose name is Chocolate. She has brown curly hair. When she feels hungry, she barks loudly. Then I know it’s time to feed her. She enjoys meat very much.

Every day I get home, she always up to me happily. As time goes by, the relationship between us becomes closer and closer. Therefore, I regard her as an important member in my family.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用提纲的给材料作文。要求介绍自己的宠物狗。分三个方面介绍，为什么喜欢它，狗的特征和习性，和小狗相处的一些情况。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。句型句式运用恰当，时态变化合理。多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，如get along with，I have kept one in my house, whose name is Chocolate. it’s time to feed her，As time goes by, closer and closer，Therefore，regard …as等等。使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。