Question

【题目】书面表达。

学校要举行英文作文大赛，主题是“我最喜欢的动物”。请你以“I like pandas/penguins…”为题，写一篇60词左右的短文描述你最喜欢的动物。可适当发挥。

提示词：penguins企鹅，Antarctic南极洲

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Answer 1

【答案】I like penguins(企鹅)

I like penguins best，because they are cute.You can see them in the zoo.Every time I go to the zoo，I go to see penguins first.They are black and white.They come from a cold world—the Antarctic.It's a beautiful place.Penguins like to swim and eat fish.They are very friendly.Do you love them?

【解析】本文属于话题作文，描述你最喜欢的动物。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如like...best, because, every time, come from以及friendly。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。