Question

书面表达。(满分15分)

2014年1月上旬，全国中东部地区17省市持续雾霾，陷入大范围的重度和严重污染。造成这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示

请以“How to protect our environment”为题写一篇短文，简单描述当今世界存在的环境问题，并重点说说如何从自身做起，保护好环境。

要求：条理清晰，语法正确，语言流畅，字迹工整，字数80词左右，文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校。

要点：1.各种污染（如空气、水、噪音等等）；

2.树木的滥砍乱伐；

3.作为一名中学生,应该如何从自身做起，保护好环境

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

How to protect/save our environment/world?

As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse today. Water is polluted, we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals are getting less and less. Some factories are pouring dirty air into the sky. The population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. People’s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases.

In order to live a better life, something must be done to stop the pollution. It’s our duty to protect our environment. We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. Trees are very helpful and important for us. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.

If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful. In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better. “There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

【解析】

试题分析：小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的内容。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. People’s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理.

考点:考查提纲类作文。