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【题目】 我们的身边有很多榜样人物，他们的行为时时影响着我们。某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈谈谁是你心中的偶像，他（她）是怎样的人，用具体事例说明为什么他（她）是你的偶像，以及你从他（她）身上学到了什么。

提示问题：Who is your role model?

What’s he / she like?

Why is he / she your role model? Give one or two examples.

What have you learned from him / her?

注意：1. 词数 100 左右；

2.可以围绕主题和提示问题，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

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【答案】例文：

My Role Model

Everyone has a role model. My role model is my friend Tom.

He is very kind and caring. At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams. However, I didn’t do well in studying, so he not only helped me with every subject, but also told me how to study in order to catch up with others. With Tom’s help, I made great progress and I thanked him very much.

I think I am lucky to have such a good friend. From now on, I will do my best to study better and better. And I hope I will learn from Tom to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others.

Written by Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：题干要求考生围绕四个问题进行阐述；其中介绍原因时用举例子展开叙述作为文章的主体，学到了什么可以作为文章的结尾，进行一个升华；举例的时候最好用过去的时态，因为阐述的是一个发生过的事实；学到了什么可以用一般现在时；注意分段和句子的衔接。