题目内容
8.假如你是张华,现要用英语写一封加入动物协会的申请信:要点:1.你是第一中学8年级学生;因为喜欢动物,所以想成为动物协会的一名成员;
2.对生物和地理感兴趣;最喜欢春天,因为….
3.你热爱自然并理解保护野生动物的重要性,
4.可拨打0510-12345678或发电子邮件zhanghua@hotmail.com联系你;
5.你加入该协会后的感受和做法.(请适当发挥1-2句)
要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右(信的开头已给出,不计入总词数).
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to join the Animal Society.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua.
分析 【高分句型一】
I love spring best because it's a perfect time to fly kites我喜欢春天因为是放风筝的好时间.
because引导的原因状语从句.
【高分句型二】
I will be happy if I can become a member of the Animal Society.如果我能成为动物协会的一员,我将会开心.
if引导的条件状语从句.
解答 Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to join the Animal Society.
I am a Grade 8 student at No.1 Middle School.I love animals,so I want to be a member of the Animal Society.(你是第一中学8年级学生;因为喜欢动物,所以想成为动物协会的一名成员;)
I am interested in Biology and Geography.I love spring best because it's a perfect time to fly kites.【高分句型一】(对生物和地理感兴趣;最喜欢春天和原因)I enjoy the natural world and understand the importance of protecting the wild animals.(热爱自然并理解保护野生动物的重要性)
You can call me on 0510-12345678 or e-mail me at zhanghua@hotmail.com.(联系方式)I will be happy if I can become a member of the Animal Society.【高分句型二】I can take part in activities every Sunday afternoon.(感受和做法)
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来,在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体.同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点.
| A. | forgot | B. | left | C. | lost | D. | missed |
| 房子的格局 | 1.有3层,可以和家人住一起; 2.前有一个漂亮的花园,后有一个足球场; 3.一层有厨房,经常和家人坐在那里喝茶、吃零食; 4.二层至少有3个卧室;我有自己的卧室,不必与姐妹共享; 5.三层有阳台,可以在那享受与朋友聊天的乐趣; |
| 房子的周边 | 1.有个购物中心,可以买到各种时尚的衣服、不同风格的礼物; 2.离我家不远处有家电影院,可以邀请朋友周末时看电影; 3.在我家旁有家快餐店,干净又舒服; |
| 其他 | …(补充一点) |
1.词数100个左右.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
2.所写短文必须包括以上要点,省略处适当发挥使短文通顺流畅.
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息.
Ladies and Gentlemen,
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That's all.Thank you!
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