Question

【题目】（题文）书面表达

三年快乐而充实的初中生活结束了，你将进入高中学习。回顾过去，展望未来，你对高中生活充满期待。请根据下面的提示写一篇80词左右的短文。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

内容要点：①简单回顾初中的学习生活，感恩老师的教导；②设想高中的生活、学习环境(如

餐厅，图书馆，运动场……)及与老师、同学融洽相处；③生活多彩、学业进步。

参考词汇：get along with；colorful(adj.)；

I am graduating from this Junior middle school and I will study in a high school soon. I`m so excited now.

Answer 1

【答案】I am graduating from this Junior middle school and I will study in a high school soon. I`m so excited now.

First of all, I thank my teachers because they always try their best to make the lessons lively and interesting. I have learnt a lot from them.

Everything is new for me in High School. I expect that it is big and clean with a large dining room. And the library is full of different kind of interesting books so that I can read them in my spare time. I hope that both my teachers and classmates are friendly and I can get along well with them. And I also expect that the life out of class is colorful so that I can enjoy all kinds of activities.

Of course, I expect I can do well in study and get a good grade in my new school.

【解析】

这篇题目要求我们根据提示写一篇英语作文，内容包括：回顾初中的学习生活，感恩老师的教导；然后设想一下未来高中的生活，从几个方面介绍：首先是学习的环境；然后是与老师和同学们的关系；接下来是高中的学习和业余生活。根据这些提示，组织语言，并用正确的英语表达出来。通过审题可知，文章中的两个内容，应以设想高中生活为主，所占篇幅应较大些；注意根据表达的需要，使用正确的时态，这篇短文应以一般现在时态为主。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子整体结构出发，使用恰当的句型和句子结构，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构，然后使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句、复合句及其他复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使全篇文章上下文意连贯，语句通顺，表达流畅。