Question

【题目】写作。请根据以下要点，以My lifestyle为题写一篇短文，70词左右，可适当发挥。
要点：1)．我叫Simon，我有一个健康的生活方式。我经常踢球保持健康。
2)．早餐我总吃一个鸡蛋或面包，喝一杯牛奶。
3)．中午我吃米饭、肉和蔬菜。
4)．晚上我吃些汤、鱼和蔬菜，蔬菜和水果对我们有好处。每天我还喝大量的水。……
My lifestyle

Answer 1

【答案】My lifestyle

I am Simon. I am a student. I am tall. I have a healthy lifestyle. I like sports. I often play football to keep fit after school.

For breakfast I always have an egg or bread, and I drink a glass of milk.

I eat rice, meat and vegetables for lunch. I have some fish, soup and vegetables for dinner. Fruit and vegetables are good for us. I also drink lots of water every day.
This is my healthy lifestyle.

【解析】这是一篇材料作文，以My lifestyle为题。结合所给材料，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态，第一人称进行叙述。作者首先介绍了我的基本情况并写出了我有一个健康的生活方式。接着有描述了我的一日三餐吃什么；然后写了水果和蔬菜对我们有好处；最后写了每天我喝大量的水。表述全面，要点完整，条例清楚，语句通顺。作者使用句子Fruit and vegetables are good for us. I also drink lots of water every day.时注意了叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。