Question

【题目】以“A trip to Beijing”为题写一篇短文。
要点：①北京是中国的首都，它在中国的北部，在冬天有雪的日子会很冷。有许多名胜古迹，每年有许多的游客去那里，这些年北京发生了巨大的变化。②张老师上周带同学们去了北京，他们乘飞机去的。登了长城，参观了故宫（Palace museum），在颐和园(Summer palace)拍了许多照片，在王府井品尝了美食。③度过了美好的时光，希望有一天再次去。
A trip to Beijing

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

A trip to Beijing

Beijing is the capital of China. It's in the north of China. It's very cold when it snows in winter.There are many places of interet in Beijing and a lot of tourists go there every year.Great changes have taken places in Beijing these years.

Last week Mr.Zhang took his students to Beijing. They went there by plane.They climbed the Great Wall,visited Palace museum,took many photos in Summer palace and tasted delicious food in Wangfujing.They had a good time there and hoped to go there again one day.

【解析】这是以“A trip to Beijing”的一篇记叙文，写作时首先要认真审题，根据要点提示确定文章文体、人称和时态。语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一 . 阅读提示，理清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.第一段介绍北京。capital, place of interet,tourist,taken place,
2.第二段叙述游北京的过程：by plane,climb,delicious food,
3.第三段游北京的感受。have a good time
二. 根据要点，写出关键词，短语或句子。
三. 组词成句，连句成篇，同时用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。注意使用一般现在时态和一般过去时态
温馨提醒：字体工整，初稿完成后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。