Question

假如你是Linda, 16岁，一个开朗外向、乐于助人的女孩。你需要向美国Brearley School递交申请，其中，需要说明你曾参加过的志愿者活动。请根据以下信息写一封申请书。

简单向对方学校介绍自己的基本情况；

从下面四幅图中选择两项志愿者活动，并介绍你参加这两项活动的情况；

描述参加活动的感受。

Dear Brearley School,

I’m writing to you in hope of studying in your school.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Brearley School,

I’m writing to you in hope of studying in your school. My name is Linda, I’m 16 years old. I am an outgoing girl. And I’m always ready to help others.

I joined a volunteer activity last year,.I really enjoyed it. I helped clean up parks ,for it can not only help protect the environment but also remind people of environmental awareness .I also went to hospital to cheer up kids,I played with them and told them stories ,they were very happy to be with me.

I think It is a good way for us students to learn and communicate by volunteering ,and it is of great importance.

I’m looking forward to your letter.

Yours,

Linda

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据图片和提示词写一封信。本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

【亮点说明】

这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。