Question

20．你喜欢旅游吗？我们的祖国地大物博，有着很多让人流连忘返的美丽景观．你去过的那些地方中，你最喜欢哪里？请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍一处给你留下深刻印象的自然景观或旅游圣地．
题目自拟，短文不得少于80个单词．
There are many places of interest in Beijing．And my favorite one is the Great Wall．We visited it last summer．The Great Wall is considered as one of the seven wonders of the world．．It's about six or seven metres high and fouror five metres wide．It has a long history of 2，500 years．It was built by the Ancient Chinese workingpeople．When we stood on it，we saw around．There are mountains around it．It looked like a huge
dragon．It's so famous that many people coming from every parts of the world
visit it．The Great Wall is the pride of our nation．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There are many places of interest in Beijing．北京有许多名胜古迹．这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
It's so famous that many people coming from every parts of the world visit it它是如此著名，以至于许多来自世界各地的人去参观它．so …that如此…以至于．

解答 There are many places of interest in Beijing【高分句型一，注意there be句型的使用】．And my favorite one is the Great Wall．We visited it last summer．【开头点明主题】The Great Wall is considered as one of the seven wonders of the world．It's about six or seven metres high and four or five metres wide．It has a long history of 2，500 years．It was built by the Ancient Chinese working people．When we stood on it，we saw around．There are mountains around it．It looked like a huge dragon．It's so famous that many people coming from every parts of the world visit it【高分句型二，注意时so …that的使用】．【正文部分详细介绍长城】The Great Wall is the pride of our nation．【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．