Question

【题目】书面表达

Name	Ms. Li
Age	35
Appearance	tall, beautiful, long curly hair
Hobbies	reading, singing, dancing, playing sports
Character (性格)	patient, friendly, warmhearted
My comment (评价)	a good teacher, a friend, a mother

根据表格所给信息写短文。

要求：1.文中不能出现真实校名和老师真实姓名。

2．语句要通顺，表达要正确。

3．文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。

4．词数：80左右。

5．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

I have met many excellent teachers in junior school. One of them is my English teacher. We call her Ms. Li.

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Answer 1

【答案】I have met many excellent teachers in junior school. One of them is my English teacher. We call her Ms. Li.

She is 35 years old. She is tall and beautiful. She has long curly hair. She teaches English very well. She also likes reading, singing, dancing and playing sports. She is patient, friendly and warmhearted.

She is a good teacher like not only a friend but also a mother to us. We all like her.

【解析】试题本篇书面表达是以“人物介绍”为主题，结合所给的写作材料，阐述Ms. Li的年龄、外貌、爱好、性格等。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。最后注意表达出自己的对Ms. Li的看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练, 时态运用准确。文中years old, and, long curly hair, also， like doing，not only...but also...like, all等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密, 语言流畅，要点齐全，内容丰富，思路清晰，这是一篇不错的范文。