Question

【题目】书面表达。

现在各行各业都在为建设美丽中国，实现中国梦而奋斗．请根据下列图示，谈谈以下几种职业怎样做贡献的．作为学生，你又该怎么办？

要求：1、短文需包含提示要点，并适当发挥；

2、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；

3、语句通顺，结构合理，书写规范；

4、词数：80词左右．短文开头部分已给出，不计入总词数．

Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．

Answer 1

【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．

In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（医生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科学家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country。

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍为建设美丽中国，实现中国梦，农民，医生，警察和科学家怎样做贡献的。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。