题目内容
书面表达（20分）学校将举行英语电影节，需要收集一些关于中国女演员的资料。请你根据下表完成一篇不少于80词的书面表达。
姓 名 | 章子怡（Zhang Ziyi） |
出生日期 | 1979年2月9日 |
出生地点 | 北京 |
童年经历 | 小时候曾苦练舞蹈，立志成为舞蹈演员。 |
演艺成就 | 1998年主演电影《我的父亲母亲》（The Road Home）而成名。 |
1999年主演电影《卧虎藏龙》（Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon），取得巨大成功。 | |
2013年她获得台湾金马奖（Golden Horse Award）。 | |
因为她的努力，现在她是中国获奖最多的女演员。 | |
慈善事业 | 积极参加许多慈善活动。她曾经捐赠给西藏（Tibet）的贫困学生大量衣服。 |
在公益广告（public service advertisements）中，呼吁阻止人们买卖野生动物。 |
Zhang Ziyi，my favourite movie star,was born on February 9 th,1979 in Beijing.When he was young,he had a dream to become a dancer,so he practised dancing very hard.However,she didn’t realise her dancer dream,instead she became a movie star.
Since his first movie “The Road Home” in 1998,which made her famouse in one night,she has achieved a lot in making films.In 1999,she starred in the film “Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon”, and it was a real hit.She was so indiffrent that she was awarded “Golden Horse Award”.Thanks to her efforts,she has become the star who has the most awards in China.
Even though she has achived a lot ih her carrer,she never fail to make contributions to charity.Once she donated lots of clothes to the poor children in Tibet. At the same time,she also played a part in the public service advertisements,appealing people to stop buying or selling the wildlife.
【解析】
试题分析：这篇作文要求我们介绍章子怡，从她的出生，童年梦想，成名作品，以及对慈善事业的专注这四个角度来描写她，属于记叙文，应该使用过去时态，写作任务中给了一定的写作要求，在明确完整表达的同时，需要考录恰当的写作顺序，力求表达流畅，不可遗漏要点。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文，作者按照题目的要求描述章子怡四个方面的经历及成就，首尾照应，结构紧凑。全文中心突出，详细全面的照应了写作任务中所有要点。文中使用了非限制性定语从句，so …that 句型，以及一些简单的并列句，为文章增色不少。同时，文章还使用了短语：was born on，starred in，Thanks to her efforts,，a real hit，make contributions to，played a part in，使文章更是万绿丛中点点红。最后作者使用了明显的三段式，使文章条理清晰，脉络通畅，一气呵成。
考点：提纲作文。
