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11.生活像一只快乐的小船,承载着无数的欢声笑语.请以"A Happy Day"为题,写一篇短文.
要求:1.描述你经历过的一件快乐的事;2.包括事件发生的时间、天气、地点、具体经过,亦可适当发挥;
3.60-80个词.
A Happy Day
My uncle lives in the country.Last fall,there was an apple harvest on his farm.He invited my family to
taste the apples.On a sunny morning,my family drove to the farm.After we got there,I couldn't wait to pick
a big and red apple on the tree.The apple tasted so sweet.Then we picked apples.In the afternoon,we had a
big meal there.I thought it was delicious.I was very happy on that day!.

分析 高分句型一
there was an apple harvest on his farm.他的农场上苹果该收获了.这是一个there be句型,表示某地有某物.
高分句型二
I thought it was delicious.我觉得很好吃.这是一个宾语从句,主句是I thought,是一般过去时,从句是 it was delicious,注意从句的时态应该和主句一致.

解答 A Happy Day 
     My uncle lives in the country.Last fall,there was an apple harvest on his farm【高分句型一,注意there be句型的使用】.He invited my family to taste the apples【开头点明主题】.On a sunny morning,my family drove to the farm.After we got there,I couldn't wait to pick a big and red  apple on the tree.The apple tasted so sweet.Then we picked apples.In the afternoon,we had a big meal there.I thought it was delicious【高分句型二,注意宾语从句的使用】.【正文部分介绍这一天的活动】I was very happy on that day!【结尾部分紧扣主题】

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料,围绕所给材料组织内容,确定主要短语,句式等问题.注意不要遗漏要点,句子要通顺连贯,没有语法错误.

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