Question

1．某英语杂志开辟中学生栏目．
请以If I enter my favourite high school，I'lldo a lot of things I expect for a long time 为题，写一篇短文，以便为该栏目投稿．词数80〜100．步骤与要点如下：
（1）确定主题；
（2）围绕主题（学习，生活，个人成长等）进行叙述；
（3）要有具体事例（1〜2点即可），并说明其原因．
要求：（1）补全标题；
（2）字迹清楚，语言规范；
（3）鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分；
（4）短文的开头巳给出，不计入总词数；
（5）短文中不要出现考生的真实校名和姓名．
If I enter my favourite high school，I'lldo a lot of things I expect for a long time．
The entrance exam（升学考试）will be over，and I'll be free for nearly two months．If I enter my favourite high school，I'll…

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：①If I enter my favourite high school，I"ll do a lot of things ②I expect for a long time．如果我进入我最喜欢的高中，我会做很多我期待很长时间的事情．
①if引导的条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"．
②为省略了引导词that的定语从句，修饰先行词things，因其作宾语故省略．
高分句型二：①What we should do is search for a balance，take part in ②as many as meaningful activities ③when you have a good grade in your study．当你有一个好的学习成绩时，我们应该做的是寻找一个平衡，参加尽可能多的有意义的活动．
①What引导的主语从句．
②as many as 多达…；as+形容词或副词的原级+as
③when引导的时间状语从句

解答 The entrance exam will be over，and I'll be free for nearly two months．If I enter my favourite high school，I"ll do a lot of things I expect for a long time．【高分句型一】【确定主题】
First of all，study will always be an really important thing to our students．So I will try my best to study hard，and use the resouses that provided by school reasonable．Communicate frequently with teachers and classmates when I have problems in my daily life．
Then，I will try my best to adjust my class．Many classmates are come from different areas，so we can't demand others to have similar habits to us，and what we can do is adjustion．The class is an large envirnment，What we can learn is not just knowledge，there are still a lot of useful things we can learn in it．Because of this，I decide to study it by my heart．
Finally，school life can't be complete without vaurous activities，then I will use my spare time to take part in these activities，to enrich my leisure time．I can also know many nice person through these activities，and learn a lot．【详细叙述自己想做的期待已久的事情】
In a word，from my point of view，school life is colorful，we can not just always study，or always join in activities．What we should do is search for a balance，take part in as many as meaningful activities when you have a good grade in your study．【高分句型二】【总结全文】

点评 本文是一篇给材料作文．在写作时要做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；   三思：词汇-＞短语-＞句式； 三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯 
文章一般可划分为3段：
（1）开头综述：概括性强． 
（2）正文--主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词．
（3）结尾：紧扣主题，简短结束，尽量升华．