Question

【题目】书面表达

根据下面的信息，写一篇短文描述Tom日常生活中的好习惯和坏习惯。

要求 1. 必须包含以下所有信息。

2. 字数60字以上。

3. 字迹清楚，认真。

1.锻炼(every day )

2. read books (每天)

3. 吃水果和蔬菜(four or six times a week )

4. eat junk food ( every day)

5. stay up late (经常)

6. sleep (less than eight hours every day)

7.使用英特网 (over two hours a day)

8.go to the dentist (never)

9. help with housework (hardly ever)

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Tom is a middle student now. He exercises every day. It is good for his health. He also reads books every day. He likes reading very much. He eats fruits and vegetables four or six times a week. But he has bad habits. He eats junk food every day. He often stays up late. So he sleeps less than eight hours every day. He hardly ever does housework at home. He surfs the Internet for over two hours a day. He never goes to the dentist. It is bad for his health.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如But he has bad habits. He hardly does housework at home. He surfs the Internet for over two hours a day.等等。