Question

【题目】书面表达（共1题，计15分）

近几年来滨州市发展很快，这将吸引更多的人来滨州。作为一名中学生，我们应该做些什么?不应该做些什么?请同学们根据提示和《中学生守则》、《中学生日常行为规范》，以“做一个可爱的滨州人”为题写一篇字数为80～120词的短文。开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

提示：Not do：speak loudly in public；throw litter

Do：be polite；ready to help others；plant trees

To Be a Lovely Binzhou Citizen

Binzhou is developing quickly these years． ______________________

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version．

To be a lovely Binzhou citizen

Binzhou is developing quickly these years．A new city is being built now．It will attract more people to come to Binzhou．So we should do well to show that both tile city and its people are lovely．In order to be a lovely Binzhou citizen，we should be polite to everyone，we shouldn’t speak loudly in public places．We should always be ready to help others．When we are on the bus．we should make room for the old．We should make our hometown clean and tidy，we shouldn't throw litter around．We should plant more trees to make our city more beautiful．I want to be a lovely Binzhou citizen．I’m now studying hard and getting ready for the future．

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文中In order to、So，以及should的使用，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。