Question

Writing 1(2015 北京)

    根据中文和英文提示，用英文写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、 不少于50词的邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词 数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

    假如你叫李华，你们学校为配合北京申办冬奥会，倡导人人 都做文明中学生。请你根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友Peter写 一封邮件，告诉他你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的，你通常 是怎么做的，以及你的感受。

提不词语：think,smile,respect,say hello to,wait in line,on time,happy 

    Dear Peter, How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student. 

    Anything new at your school?

                         Yours,Li Hua

Answer 1

Writing 1

[写作提示]

1. 本文的话题是校园生活，学生比较熟悉。写作内容充分体现了 社会主义核心价值观——文明、和谐。主体时态是一般现在时。

2. 内容要点：

(1) 提出自己的观点，做文明中学生什么样的品德行为最为重 要；(一般现在时)

(2) 说出自己平时的礼貌行为；(一般现在时)

(3) 表达自己对做文明中学生，具有良好品德的感受。(一般现 在时)

3. 词句亮点：

(1) I think it is important to be polite to others.本句不仅用宾语从句 丰富了句式而且含有il is+a办+to do sth.句型;

(2) 1 feel happy for doing all these because it is right for a student to do so.本句含有because引导的原因状语从句，丰富了句式，并且feel + a办+for doing sth.与 it is right for a student to do so 句型的使用，使语言 更加多彩。

[参考范文]

Dear Peter,

    How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student.I think it is important to be polite lo others.I say hello to my teachers and classmates.I smile at everyone I talk to. Following rules is also important.I wait in line at the bus stop and go to school on time. I feel happy for doing all these because it is right for a student to do so.

    Anything new at your school?

                         Yours,Li Hua