Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是小玲，上周日，你和你的美国朋友Betty在西山公园玩得很开心。现在请你根据下列表格的信息，议“A Happy Day”为题写一篇英语短文。

Time	Things
In the morning	climb the mountain see beautiful flowers and monkeys
At noon	have a picnic on the grassland listen to music
In the afternoon	go boating on the lake feed fish

（写作要求）

1. 文中应包括以上信息，可适当发挥，行文连贯，书写规范。

2. 文章字数在70词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名等。

A Happy Day

Last Sunday, Betty and I had a very good time in Xishan Park.

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Answer 1

【答案】A Happy Day

Last Sunday, Betty and I had a very good time in Xishan Park. In the morning, we got up early to catch the bus to Xishan Park. We climbed the mountain, laughing and singing. On the way up to the top, we saw lots of beautiful flowers and lovely monkeys. When we got back to the foot of the mountain, it was time to have lunch. So we had a picnic on the grassland. After that, we listened to music, feeling relaxed. In the afternoon, we went boating on the lake and fed fishes. When we got home, both of us felt tired but happy.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如have a good time、in the morning、catch the bus、climb the mountain、on the way up to the top、the foot of the mountain、have lunch、had a picnic、after that、listen to music、go boating on the lake、both of us等。而非谓语动词结构“We climbed the mountain, laughing and singing./ it was time to have lunch.”和“When we got back to the foot of the mountain, it was time to have lunch./ When we got home, both of us felt tired but happy.”等时间状语从句的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。