Question

【题目】书面表达（12分）

你校正在举行“节约用水，从现在做起”的英语征文比赛，你打算投稿，请根据以下表格内容写一篇短文。

必要性	没有水人类就无法生存
不良现象	不关水龙头（tap），洗澡时间很长；没喝完水就把瓶子扔掉
建议	你的2-3个建议

注意：字数80字左右，文章开头不计入总词数；

Act now to save water

Water is very important to us. _____________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

People can’t live without water. Plants and animals will did without water.

Almost everybody knows the importance of water. But there are still some people wasting water. For example, some students often forget to turn off the taps; Some people take showers for a long time.

I want to give some advice on how to save water. First, we should take a shower instead of taking a bath. Second , we should turn off the taps after we use water. Third , when we drink mineral water, make sure the water in the bottle is drunk up before throwing it.

Act now to save water.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题材料作文。本文所给的材料比较详细。我们要把这些材料用正确的英语把它表达出来，动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。根据要求可知本文主要是一般现在时，人称是第三人称。写作中注意人称、时态、主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文的联系，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的全部内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在句子的结构上很好地使用了简单句。文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时文章还用了一些常用的句式和短语，为文章增添了不少色彩。