Question

最近，你班开展了一场以“my dream” 为题的演讲比赛。请你就自身理想写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。

提示： 1 what do you want to be ?( newsreader / reporter / scientist/ doctor/ teacher/ sportman…)

2. Why do you want to be a …?

3. How can you be a … in the future?

I want to be a ______ in the future

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I want to be a teacher in the future

I want to be a teacher when I studied in the first grade in the elementary school. The first time I saw a teacher teaches so many students, I thought it is the most greatness job. How greatness is a teacher! I decided to be a teacher in the future.

When I was in the fifth grade, I met an important man in my life, my teacher. He was a kind and special teacher. I was timidity until meeting him. He told me many things, and charged me with a class organizer. I have been more and more daring since I met him. Now I always miss him. I thank to his administrant very much.

I want to be a teacher in the future because I met many good teachers. I want to be as good as them. They gave me much administrant; I want to give much administrant to our children. Being a teacher is difficult now. Being a good teacher is more difficult. But I think I can do everything if I do my best!

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。