Question

李明准备在发言时回忆与班级同学一起度过的美好时光，如课堂上认真的学习生活，课后愉快的游戏，运动，轻松快乐的户外旅行等等。他也准备将自己的高中生活的打算与大家一起分享。

注意：1、字数 80~100左右，文章开头已给出。

2、文章中不得出现真实学校和姓名。

My dear class, it’s my last time to give such a speech in this class.

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My class, no matter how far I will be away from you , I will miss you all.

 

Answer 1

My dear class, it’s my last time to give such a speech in this class.

Our teachers are experienced in teaching. They are strict with us, but when we have difficulty, they are patient enough. They treat us as their own children. How kind they are!

I like my classmates. We learn from and help each other. We share our happiness and sadness with each other, too!

I have spent three years in our school. I have a great time and I am good at my studies.

Sadly, I will leave here soon. But I will never forget my school, my teachers, and my friends. My teachers taught me knowledge; my classmates gave me friendship, my school left me a good memory. Shouldn’t I say thanks to my school, my teachers and my classmates?I will study hard in the future.I will miss our school,our teachers and classmates.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让小作者介绍和同学度过的美好时光。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: They treat us as their own children.他们把我们看做他们的孩子等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：话题类作文。