Question

4．Write at least 60words about the topic"A model student"（以"一个模范学生"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Suggested questions：
•Who is a model student？
•What can you learn from him or her？
•Do you like to be a model student？
•What are you going to do to be a model student？

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
He often helps me with my English．他经常帮我学英语．
help sb with sth．表示在某方面帮助某人
【高分句型二】
It is  our duty to protect our world．保护我们的世界是我们的责任．
It is one's duty to do sth．表示"做某事是某人的责任"是固定句型．

解答 A Model Student
 I have a good friend in my class．His name is Li Lei．I think he is a model Student．【指出模范生是谁】
Li Lei is a kind boy．He likes helping others．He often helps me with my English．【高分句型】Now my English is better than before．Also，LiLei often rides bike to school and plants trees and so on．He says it is our duty to protect our world．【高分句型】【模范生的事迹】
   I think friends should be similar．I decide to be a person like LiLei．I will help others and protect our environment．【所学所感】

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．