Question

8．根据提示，写一篇短文介绍张华的变化．词数60 左右．
提示：张华，一个九年级学生．家庭富裕（rich）．过去零花钱常常花在打电脑游戏上．现在，他努力学习，将零花钱大部分捐给UNICEF．他觉得帮助别人会使他自己快乐．
Zhang Hua is a Grade 9 student of Sunshine Secondary School．His family is rich．He used to spend most of his pocket money buying snacks and playing computer games．He didn't work so hard at school．
Last summer，he went to a poor village．There he saw many poor children who weren't able to go to school because their families were too poor．
That experience affected Zhang Hua a lot．Now Zhang Hua works very hard at school and he donates most of his pocket money to UNICEF and he takes an active part in many charity activities to help people in need．He thinks it important to help people in need．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
There he saw many poor children who weren't able to go to school because their families were too poor．
句中"who weren't able to go to school"为定语从句，修饰"poor children"，"because their families were too poor"为"because"引导的原因状语从句，"be able to do sth"意为"有能力做某事"．这句话意为：在那儿他看到很多因为家里太穷而不能去上学的贫困儿童．
高分句型二：
He thinks it important to help people in need．
句子结构为"think it+形容词+to do sth 认为．．怎么样"，其中"it"为形式宾语，代指"to help people"．"in need"意为"在困难中的"．这句话意为：他认为帮助处于困境的人们很重要．

解答 Zhang Hua is a Grade 9 student of Sunshine Secondary School．His family is rich．He used to spend most of his pocket money buying snacks and playing computer games．He didn't work so hard at school．（过去的张华）
     Last summer，he went to a poor village．There he saw many poor children who weren't able to go to school because their families were too poor．【高分句型一】（改变的原因）
     That experience affected Zhang Hua a lot．Now Zhang Hua works very hard at school and he donates most of his pocket money to UNICEF and he takes an active part in many charity activities to help people in need．He thinks it important to help people in need．【高分句型二】（现在的张华）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．