Question

【题目】初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了挥之不去的记忆。请你给大家讲一下最值得你回忆的故事，包括时间、人物、事情的经过和事后你的感想。

提示词语：four years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy, sorry.

要求如下：1. 短文内容应该包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等；

2. 短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

3. 词数100 左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】How times flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a few days. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn English. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

【解析】本篇作文属于话题作文，所给提示简洁明了，要求明确，话题内容贴近学生学习实际，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态以及主谓一致问题。讲述过去的事情用一般过去时，讲述现在的事情用一般现在时，展望未来要用一般将来时。同时注意上下文要联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。