题目内容
【题目】中学生学习时间长,压力大,专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。某英文报正在就“学生适当的放松方式”这一话题进行征文。假设你是二十二中八年级(3)班的班长,最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行了调查。请根据调查信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投稿。
对象 | 人数 | 常用放松方式 | 你的观点 |
十二中初三(3)班 | 60 男(31)女(29) | 1.看电视(30人):2.玩电脑游戏(12人):3.听音乐(8人)4进行体育银炼(5人:5.没 有时间放松(5人) | 哪一种(些)放松方式是适当的?为什么? |
TheProperWay(s)forStudentstoRelax
I am the monitor of Class 3, Grade 8, No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】The Proper Way(s) for Students to Relax
I am the monitor of Class 3 Grade 8. No 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.
There are 60 students in my class (31 boys and 29 girls). Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV. 12 students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music. 5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax. As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax.
In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax. I think taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides, it can help improve our health. Therefore, I often play ping-pong.
【解析】
这是一篇话题作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下“学生适当的放松方式”这一话题。所提供的表格中列举了对象、人数、常用的放松方式。主要从常用放松方式和你的观点等方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时,人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含表格上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【高分句型】
I think taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. 我认为运动是一种适当的方式,因为它能让我们的大脑和眼睛休息。because it can rest our brains and eyes.是由because引导的原因状语从句。