Question

【题目】书面表达。

假如你是李强，有一天在上学路上，你看到赵王河公园河岸的道路损坏严重，一些彩砖不见去向，影响人们的出行。请用英语给China Daily菏泽频道写一封信，反映这一问题，并提出你的看法和建议。

（一）参考词汇：destroy毁坏；color bricks彩砖；disppear消失；repair修复；take measures采取措施；protect保护；public facilities公共设施

（二）其他要求：100字左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。

Dear Editor,

I'm a high school student___________________________________________________________________

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Li Qiang

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m a high school student. One day, on my way to school I found that along the river bank in Zhaowang River Park, the road was badly destroyed and some color bricks had disappeared, which would affect people’s going out. Perhaps these bricks were carried away by some people nearby and kept by themselves. I’m very sorry about that.

Since the public facilities are often destroyed like that, I suggest that our government should repair the road as soon as possible and take some measures to protect these public facilities. And as for us students, whenever we find someone destroying our public facilities, we should make efforts to stop him or her in time. Only in this way can we have a more beautiful and comfortable city to live in.

Li Qiang

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求给China Daily写一封信，反映看到的问题，并提出自己的看法和建议。这是一封书信，要注意书信的基本格式，注意书信的语言选择。根据短文提示，本文就从两个方面来写作，一是自己在上学路上看到的情况，主要用第一人称，一般过去时态进行表达；二是自己的建议和看法，用一般现在时态。

写作亮点：本范文层次清楚，条理分明。短文分为两部分，第一部分是写作者在上学路上看到了一些现象。本段叙述清楚，表达准确。用了宾语从句，定语从句等等表达形式，使得本段生动具体。第二部分是作者的看法与建议。条理清楚，中心突出。本段使用了宾语从句，时间状语从句；还准确恰当地使用了as soon as, take measures, as for, make efforts, in this way等等结构，给本段增色不少。