Question

Writing 10(2011 盐城)

    初中三年的英语学习中，北京阳光中学的同学成了与我们 朝夕相处的朋友，其中Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给 我们留下了深刻的印象。请根据课本内容及下表提示，用英语 写一•篇题为“My Friend Daniel”的短文。

注意事项：

1. 词数:80词左右(已给出的文章开头不计入总词数) ；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

3. 文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。

        My Friend Daniel

    My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He 

Answer 1

Writing 10

[写作提示]

1. 审题:本文属于描写人的记叙文，基本时态为一般现在时态。

2. 确定要点:①描写出Daniel的外貌特征;②Daniel的喜好(喜欢 的和不喜欢的) ；③Daniel的品质：善良、乐于助人、具有创造力；④可 以从Daniel身上学到什么。

[参考范文]

            My Friend Daniel

    My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He wears glasses.He likes playing computer games but dislikes doing sports.

    Daniel is helpful and kind. Once he helped an old woman cross the road.He spends much of his spare time working at the Helping Hands Club. He is such a creative boy that he created a TV programme for a competition. Daniel is also polite and everyone likes him.

    Daniel is so great that we must learn from him. We will try our best to help each other and get along well with others to create a happy home for both you and me.