Question

【题目】书面表达

山东潍坊以风筝闻名于世。假如你叫王静，是山东潍坊人，请根据提示写一篇短文介绍一下潍坊风筝。提示：1.山东潍坊以风筝闻名于世，它被全世界的人所熟知。

2.潍坊有各种各样的风筝，有的像鸟，有的像龙，有的像人。

3.风筝由竹子、纸或丝绸制成。制造者主要是农民，手工制造。

4.潍坊国际风筝节在每年四月举行，全国各地及世界各地很多人都前来观看或参加比赛。

要求：1.不要逐字逐句翻译

2.可适当发挥

3.词数80--100词

潍坊国际风筝节Weifang International Kite Festival

Answer 1

【答案】

I am a girl. My name is Wang Jin. I come from Weifang, Shandong Province. Weifang is famous for its kites. It is known all over the world. There are all kinds of kites in Weifang, Some are like birds, some are like dragons, some are like persons. They are made of bamboo, paper or silk. They are often made by farmers. The Weifang International Kite Festival is held in April every year.

The kites in our hometown are very beautiful and they can fly very high. I hope that they can become better and better and bring people more happiness.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了一些短语如come from，be famous for，all kinds of，be made of，be made by等，还使用了一些主从复合句如I hope that they can become better and better and bring people more happiness.，这些都为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。