Question

12．有个中文网站提出"走路去上学"的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约90个单词的英文短文．
内容提示：有60%的同学认为（1）走路有利于健康且安全． （2）不需要父母接送，学会遵守交通规则．（3）道路上车辆减少，城市不再拥堵．有40%的同学认为走路浪费许多时间，路途远的同学可能会造成上课迟到．对此，你怎么看？
Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise【高分句型一】．I think it's good for health and it's safe．When we walk with our classmates，we can talk about something interesting and know each other better．【高分句型二】Also，we can help each other．What's more，if we walk，our parents don't have to send us to school．We can learn to look after ourselves．As a result，there will be fewer cars in the city．Then the streets are no longer crowded．
I hope more and more students will go to school on foot．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise．步行去上学是锻炼的很好的一个方式．
Walking 是动名词，在句子中作主语．
【高分句型二】we can talk about something interesting and know each other better．
我们可以谈论一些有趣的事情，更好地了解彼此．Something是不定代词，修饰不定代词的形容词要后置．

解答 Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise【高分句型一】．I think it's good for health and it's safe．When we walk with our classmates，we can talk about something interesting and know each other better．【高分句型二】Also，we can help each other．What's more，if we walk，our parents don't have to send us to school．We can learn to look after ourselves．As a result，there will be fewer cars in the city．Then the streets are no longer crowded．
   I hope more and more students will go to school on foot．

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